A Lesson Of Love

[pweddygurl]

WHEN YOU SAID IT WAS OVER
THAT WE HAD WAS THROU
I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY
EXCEPT WHY BABY I LOVE YOU

YOU TOOK OFF WALKING
NOT EVEN A GOODBYE
AND AS YOU STARTED TO DISAPEAR
A TEAR FELL FROM MY EYE

I THOUGHT TO MYSELF THIS IS IT
ITS ALL COME TO AN END
AND THEN SAID TO MYSELF
WELL WE CAN STILL BE FRIENDS

ABOUT AN HOUR OR SO LATER
THERE WAS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR
AND AS I WENT TO OPEN IT
I WAS SHOCKED TO FIND YOU THERE

I THOUGHT THAT YOU CAME BACK FOR ME
TO SAY THAT YOU WERE SORRY
BUT INSTEAD YOU WANTED THE CROSS
THE ONE THAT YOU HAD MADE FOR ME

AS YOU WERE LEAVING
I WENT FOR A KISS
BUT YOU TURNED AWAY
IN TIME TO MISS IT

I CRIED MYSELF TO SLEEP THAT NIGHT
NOT KNOWING WHAT ELSE TO DO
SO I ASKED MYSELF WHAT WENT WRONG
AND THEN WHAT SHOULD I DO

I COULD'NT LET HIM GO
NOT JUST LIKE THAT
NOT KNOWING WHAT WAS WRONG
AND IF HE WOULD COME BACK

THE NEXT DAY I WAS WATHING TV
WHEN OUT OF THE BLUE THE PHONE RINGS
SO I ANSWERED IT TO FIND YOU ON THE OTHER END
TELLING ME YOU WERE SORRY AND HOW MUCH YOU LOVED ME

WE TALKED FOR AWHILE
AND THEN YOU ASKED
IF IT WAS OK FOR YOU TO COME OVER
AND OFCOURSE I SAID YES

WE TALKED IT ABOUT IT
ONLY TO FIND OUT
THAT NOTHING WAS WRONG
THAT HE LEFT OUT OF DOUBT

HE THOUGHT THAT WHAT WE HAD WAS TO GOOD TO BE TRUE
THAT HOW COULD ONE WOMAN LOVE HIM SO TRUE
HE THOUGHT HE WAS DREAMING THAT IT WAS ALL A LIE
BUT KNOW HE KNOWS NO MATTER WHAT I'LL ALWAYS BE ON HIS SIDE.

[Erika]

this one wasn't as deep as some of the others,its like you only skimmed the top of wht you could've dpne with it. It's still good, but try to go further with it.

[pweddygurl]

lol thankyou yeah i try i edited it soo much then i just gave up and left it like that

[Erika]

lol. i know what you mean. where you wright the beginnings of a good poem and you try to go deeper but it just won't go. lol. Like my one about stars....cept it sucked after...lol

[pweddygurl]

im sure it was good

[Erika]

i'll post it 4 u if u want

her tiz...

Star

Millions, Billions, trillions. Living forever to burn for all eternity until the day they lose their spark. In one explosion a solar system disappears. It’s fiery bowels engulfing it’s surroundings. Lashes of burning death for millions of miles. The destruction though has a beauty unmatched by any other. But it’s lights flames and devours worlds at a time. Sunspots. An explosion. Just one of many to look up at the misted sky. They see that dieing star until it fades away. Forgotten. It’s burning light leaves it. Watching as a falling star. Already risen. Never to rise again



this is probaby one of my worst poems i've ever written....kill it! yeah, well if u hav n e suggestions to help me take away the shame, then pelase step up to help...