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Post by Sophie on Dec 17, 2005 16:18:59 GMT -5
Life Is A Song
Caught in a storm Too sad to speak The rain and the tears Both fall on my cheek
I notice a star Alone in the sky So very alone And I walk on right by
Sing to myself To the moon and the air To the dark and the dank It’s not like they care
See my reflection In a puddle, on the ground Open my heart Let the beat pound and pound
The beating then stops There is a silence long Blood drips from my body An unfinished song
Sooo...whadda you think? You like? Huh? HUH? HHHHUUUUUHHHHH?!?!?!? Constructive critisism, comments, questions, and any other talking-like feature that is included in your bodily system is welcome, except non-constructive critisism.
Example: omg i fing hate it!
It totally doesn't help me at all. If you really 'fing hate it', tell me why at least. Thanx! ;D
Love, Sophie
XOXO Happy Holidays
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Post by pweddygurl on Dec 19, 2005 21:46:09 GMT -5
I really like that it soo kewl
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Post by Sophie on Dec 22, 2005 20:23:17 GMT -5
Thanks, glad you like it! ;D
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